better...
but this is still osme amateur sounds. wow melody is liek dskfjkl;adsfldjsfkldfkdjfklajklds ahhhhh, could have been more pads to fill in that emptyness. good synths, still amateur soundng.
better...
but this is still osme amateur sounds. wow melody is liek dskfjkl;adsfldjsfkldfkdjfklajklds ahhhhh, could have been more pads to fill in that emptyness. good synths, still amateur soundng.
wow holy freaking crap
this is amazing. tf is like the best on ng. im surprised he gave his flp! that song is amazing! you made an almost better vers! not quite as fast! but this is sper super super unique style. I LOVE IT never seen it before! awesome awesome awesome work. your best ever!
thanx bud ill shall reveiw ur stuff =)
yea this song also stuck in my head also XD
Awesome
This is a really good song! i like how the kick goes all like dodo ddd do, needs more fill, the kick is basic ssorta, put a VT_Ride on it, basic instruments, send some to the mixer and give them some overdrive and compression. awesome melody. my aim is DJFanta5t1c if you ever wanna collab anytime. this is totally awesome!
cool remix!
i just got fl6 hehehe! i like this better than the one in fl. go tmore to it i think
hhaha AWEOSME
its classifeid wrong, this is industrial! sounds so dman cool thjo that i really ont care!!!
industrial? WHA?????? its gabber!! lol.
Actually
i think the i love you is cool haha!!! it plays then bass kciks its like dhkjsk! sweetness yo! this is the first thing ive listend to by you haha. your evrywhere!!!
WAY BETETR!
he is right! your music is way under rated! lovly kick! awesome melody. awesome remix! hmmm i still think the kick could be more badass! sounds so damn awesome i dont give a shit tho hehehe! very good!!! awesomely sweet stuff, hope to hear more!!
Thanks for the review :) Yea about that bass I just kept it kinda simple cause I didn't wanna overdo it like my last two songs but your right I coulda used something more origional. Ill be postin some more stuff in a month or so I dunno... Thanks tho!
~Red 7
well
i can see why this is only 3.63. lovin the melo at the end. it all ends up very well. tho, that kick, is way to basic. if it was heavyier and hade a ride cymbal on it it would kill everything!!! the VT_Ride is a good one to use, then put some reverb and compresser and all that haha on it. cool shi.
Yea this is an old one but definately still worth looking at what people think about it. If I go back on this song yea I can understand reworking the beat as well as some of the synths. In this song I let the bass take care of the beat rather than letting them sound seperate. I also used alot of old samples and reworked the song eq on Music Maker. Needless to say yea it does need some help but now I know all those things to look out for in my next songs. Thank you for your review!
~Red 7
cool
sounds very very cool. hehe you use garageband. sadly i know like all the sounds of the program =P. i have it too! and it sucks. if you have a pc get fl or if a mac. logic. gb was neevr made to be an expert music making program. hehe what you id was pushing the limitas of it.
good filling of the song. i like that synth. everything revolved around the beat, done very nicely. a good variety of instruments used. could use some more bass in the kick. nice pad sounds, with the clash. i get lost when the jungle takes over tho. the song comes back, but it got really interesting.
over all, great song. ill give a nine casue its your first! i must say. its way better than my first one hehehe.
if you ever interested, id like to do a collab! send me a private message if your interested!!!
peace
Thank you for your critique. I apreciate the fact that you cited what should be worked on. That's very helpful for future projects. I hate negative reviews that just state the fact that you don't like it, but I always welcome constuctive criticism. So, once again thank you for your honesty and also for not just saying stuff to make me feel good about it. I'm not perect and I like to know how I can improve.
I very much apreciated your review,
D-VO, a.k.a. seven_flower
WOW!
lots of effects! makes it very interesting and well put together! i dont have msn, but i do have aim and yahoo. so yea we can definallly do a collab if you have either of those!!!
well i only have msn XDD msn the best woot XD get msn 8.0 or 7.5 those are the best versions =)
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