well
i can see why this is only 3.63. lovin the melo at the end. it all ends up very well. tho, that kick, is way to basic. if it was heavyier and hade a ride cymbal on it it would kill everything!!! the VT_Ride is a good one to use, then put some reverb and compresser and all that haha on it. cool shi.
Yea this is an old one but definately still worth looking at what people think about it. If I go back on this song yea I can understand reworking the beat as well as some of the synths. In this song I let the bass take care of the beat rather than letting them sound seperate. I also used alot of old samples and reworked the song eq on Music Maker. Needless to say yea it does need some help but now I know all those things to look out for in my next songs. Thank you for your review!
~Red 7
cool
sounds very very cool. hehe you use garageband. sadly i know like all the sounds of the program =P. i have it too! and it sucks. if you have a pc get fl or if a mac. logic. gb was neevr made to be an expert music making program. hehe what you id was pushing the limitas of it.
good filling of the song. i like that synth. everything revolved around the beat, done very nicely. a good variety of instruments used. could use some more bass in the kick. nice pad sounds, with the clash. i get lost when the jungle takes over tho. the song comes back, but it got really interesting.
over all, great song. ill give a nine casue its your first! i must say. its way better than my first one hehehe.
if you ever interested, id like to do a collab! send me a private message if your interested!!!
peace
Thank you for your critique. I apreciate the fact that you cited what should be worked on. That's very helpful for future projects. I hate negative reviews that just state the fact that you don't like it, but I always welcome constuctive criticism. So, once again thank you for your honesty and also for not just saying stuff to make me feel good about it. I'm not perect and I like to know how I can improve.
I very much apreciated your review,
D-VO, a.k.a. seven_flower
WOW!
lots of effects! makes it very interesting and well put together! i dont have msn, but i do have aim and yahoo. so yea we can definallly do a collab if you have either of those!!!
well i only have msn XDD msn the best woot XD get msn 8.0 or 7.5 those are the best versions =)
Your best!
Your are my favorite on SIX1 and you are still the ebst here!!!
Thanks, It's flattering to be your favorite! But there are some very skilled artists on SIX1 who haven't really submitted anything, like czer323. Check out his NG page.
DUDE!!!
your a MASTER! and you deserve more credit for all of your stuff!!! you hsould definally consider join SIX1 Studios! its for people that are really good! your stuff like would be number 1 on there! they need some new stuff too haha and your stuff will totally make like all the difference! im also at the site! DJFanta5t1c! =D always a fan!
Fanta5t1c
lol more credit!? ^_^
I'm dominating the 1st place in techno highscores, can't get better than that ;)
~ X-Digital
Age 32, Male
Joined on 5/15/06
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